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Ross Young's avatar

This is fantastic, bloody, messy warfare, it's packed. This bit though-

"He died.

Sweet relief.

Then revived.

Sour grief."

Well that's just brilliant, the way it punctures the action as well. Damn you!!

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Halo Scot's avatar

Awwww too sweet! Thanks a dumpster full of octopus corpses, Death Lord!!!!!

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Omstars this is action packed beautiful. And the part where he died then revived....that part sings. I'm in awe....

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Halo Scot's avatar

Thank you so, so much, Maryellen! 🖤❤️✨

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Rose J. Fairchild's avatar

Phenomenal, Halo!!! So much action!!! I was enthralled by the battle The Horn is witnessing, but even moreso by his internal battle. (Also, I’d never thought about how well he would blend in on a gory battlefield, but that description was ESPECIALLY *chef’s kiss*!! Bravo!!! 🔥🔥🔥♥️🌹❤️‍🔥

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Halo Scot's avatar

Awwwww thank you MILLIONS, incredible Rose!!! You are an angel! 🖤❤️✨

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Rose J. Fairchild's avatar

♥️🌹❤️‍🔥♥️🌹❤️‍🔥

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